Monday, April 30, 2012

Writing Without Pictures: Guest Author, Jodi Moore

Today marks the final installment in the new series, Writing Without Pictures, about Picture Book writers who DO NOT illustrate...and I have to say, we are going out with a BANG! with the amazingly fabulous Jodi Moore, author of WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN (Flashlight Press).  There is no doubt that DRAGON is one of my favorite picture books...AND Jodi Moore is one of my favorite people.  Best of all, on May 1st DRAGON celebrates his first birthday.  How honored I am that she is here to celebrate with us.
So Happy Birthday, Dragon and welcome Jodi!

“Leave room for the illustrator.”

If you’re writing a picture book, you’ve undoubtedly heard that.  It’s grilled into us at conferences. Spelled out in books. Scribbled in red all over our manuscripts by trusted editors and critique partners.
 
I’m certainly not going to argue the point. In fact, I’m going to expound upon it.

In my humble opinion, leaving room for something (or someone) assumes boundaries. For example:

Leave room in the suitcase for an extra pair of shoes; or
Leave room in the closet for your sister’s clothes; or (my personal favorite)
Leave room in your stomach for dessert.

All of these imply certain constraints. Limits. Walls.

In my mind, illustrators take an author’s words to places outside of those perimeters. Where limits no longer exist. To a level you never dreamed possible.

Perhaps this is best “illustrated” by sharing my own story.

WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN, my first published picture book, was written when my husband Larry and I were in the throes of empty nest syndrome (admittedly, this is a chronic condition for me).

That Labor Day was our first time visiting the beach without our two sons, who had left for college a week earlier. Despite (or perhaps because of) the fact we were missing our boys, my hubby brought his satchel of sand toys, determined to carry on the family tradition of crafting a sandcastle.  Of course, it didn’t take long for him to attract a little army of helpers, as children gravitated toward the “construction site” in droves.

(Note: I spent my time that afternoon flitting around to the ever-growing gaggle of anxious moms, explaining why a mature man would be building a sandcastle, seemingly alone, resulting in luring their precious babies toward him. Apprehension was replaced by relief and understanding smiles when I explained the whole Empty Nest thing.)

At one point, one of the toddlers stuck a piece of seaweed into the mouth of the castle. Always positive, Larry took one look and said, “Look! A dragon’s tail! Our castle is so cool, a dragon moved in!”

And the heavens opened and the angels sang…a story was conceived.

WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN is indeed based on the premise that if you build the perfect sandcastle, a dragon will move in. And that’s exactly what happens to one very lucky little boy at the beach. Things are going quite splendidly, in fact, until his family refuses to believe the dragon is real. Then the mischief ensues.

Is there a real dragon in the castle? Or is this just a figment of the boy’s imagination?

That’s what I want the reader to decide for him/herself.

And that’s where the problem surfaced.

I brought my original manuscript to the Intensives at my first SCBWI NY conference, where I signed up for 2 peer critiques, each moderated by an editor. In my morning session, the editor told me that she enjoyed the story, but that I had to make sure the readers knew the dragon was imaginary.

* sigh *

In the afternoon session, a different editor told me he thought the story was well-written, but that I had to make sure readers knew the dragon was real.

* heavy sigh *

Needless to say, I was confused and admittedly, discouraged. I remember saying to my husband, “Well, as soon as I get my rejection from Flashlight Press, I guess I have some decisions to make.”

A couple of months later, I got an email from the amazing Shari Dash Greenspan, the editor for Flashlight. She, too, said she thought the story was really cute…but was the dragon real or imaginary?

* gah *

Before I could talk myself out of it, I typed, “I want the reader to decide” and hit send. I expected the rejection to come lightening quick.

Only it didn’t. Instead, I got an email asking the question: How do we illustrate a creature that may or may not be there?

It was then I realized what a challenge my manuscript posed. Together, Shari and I researched and brainstormed. We read and discussed.

I agonized and ate chocolate.

Thankfully, I am blessed with an editor who thinks like an artist. Shari took my vision and molded, developed and expanded upon it. Then, she placed it in the skilled and loving hands of my brilliant illustrator, Howard McWilliam.

I like to say that Howard crawled inside my head and drew what was in my heart, but in actuality, he created something my heart had yet to even realize.

Howard produced spreads where both options were not only possible, they were visible. They were plausible. They were adorable! We saw – we smelled – the smoke from the dragon’s nostrils…or was it from the dad’s barbecue?

Howard infused color into my concepts, sprinkled seasonings into my settings and breathed life into my characters. He made my dream come true, by transforming my simple words into something simply magical.

Leave room for the illustrator? Why impose such limits? Instead, gift your manuscript to the artist as if it were a beautiful kite. Cut that string and let it soar in your illustrator’s capable hands, free, untethered and uninhibited.

You may just reach heights previously unimagined.


Jodi Moore is the author of WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN (Flashlight Press) and is totally in awe of her brilliant talent of illustrator Howard McWilliam. Her next book GOOD NEWS NELSON (Story Pie Press) is due for release December 2012 and is presently in the gifted hands of fabulous artist Brendan Flannelly-King.

Jodi considers books, along with chocolate, to be one of the main food groups.  She writes both picture books and young adult novels, hoping to challenge, nourish and inspire her readers by opening up brand new worlds and encouraging unique ways of thinking.  Jodi is the proud and (admittedly) neurotic mother of two incredibly talented young adults and never ceases to be amazed at how far the umbilical cord really will stretch. She lives in central PA with her always-supportive best friend/husband, Larry, two laughing doves and an ever-changing bunch of characters in her head. In addition to reading, writing and chocolate, Jodi enjoys music, theatre, dancing, the beach and precious time spent with her family.  Finally, Jodi thinks it would be really cool if one of her stories eventually became a Disney or Universal movie or theme park ride. Or a Broadway musical. Just puttin’ it out there.

Read more about Jodi at www.writerjodimoore.com

29 comments:

  1. Thanks so much for inviting me into your world, Marcie! Such an honor and a thrill to share my story...especially on the eve of Dragon's 1st birthday! Love & hugs to you for helping to share the Dragon love! <3 Jodi :)

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  2. Great column Jodi! I'm sure you told me about where you got the idea for Dragon, but I love hearing(reading) it every time.

    Paul

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    1. Thanks, Paul...is it okay to say that I love sharing it every time? ;-) *giggle*

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  3. Lovely post! Thanks for the insight.

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    1. Thanks, Susan...totally my pleasure and honor to be here! :)

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  5. I read your book a few weeks ago, Jodi, and was delighted by how clever it was! I loved that either option was possible and child readers could decide for themselves! Although I haven't had the pleasure of working with her, Shari is a terrific and gifted editor - witness all the fabulous books produced by Flashlight! Thanks for sharing your story!

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    1. Thanks for your sweet comment, Susanna! I feel so blessed to be a Flashlight author! <3

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  6. I enjoyed this post a great deal. A sandcastle construction site does have the power to attract the young and young at heart. So glad it generated this lovely story!

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    1. Thanks, Cathy! Thankfully, parents are no longer worried...he's now referred to as "Sandcastle Man". We're working on his cape - LOL! :)

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  8. This is so good, Jodi...thanks for the reminder....and a look into your journey through the world publishing snags! Great job!
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    1. Thanks, Jarm. I really *didn't* understand how important it was to let go - to let the illustrator have his/her "say" - until Dragon. Now, I'm like the poster child for the philosophy! ;-)

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  9. Love the story behind the story, Jodi! Your book was in the very fist shipment I got from Amazon Italy in January, when I started building my PB library for my twin toddler boys, who are already total beach bums. I just love it, both text and pictures. Congrats on the bday!

    I actually write very spare text, with perhaps even TOO much room for an illustrator...is that bad?

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    1. Aww, how delighted and honored am I that my Dragon is sharing a home with your two boys? *bliss*

      And...Amazon Italy? Okay, that's just too cool...*breaks to do Tigger dance*

      Okay, I'm back now. Thanks SO much - and for the birthday wishes! <3

      Great question about leaving "too" much room. I think it depends on the manuscript and on your expectations. In my humble opinion, sometimes it's okay (perhaps even necessary) to include a note or two on illustrations, particularly if what needs to happen in the pictures is not specifically written in the text, but is integral to your storytelling.

      Wishing you every success with your writing! :)

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    2. Thanks, Jodi! That's what I was thinking too, but it makes me nervous. Everyone has different preferences. I just keep asking myself, What would Jon Klassen have done with the ms for I Want My Hat Back if he hadn't illustrated it himself? :)

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    3. So true...on all accounts. And admittedly, a finished product doesn't always fit your vision. But sometimes, it can be so much more! :)

      Totally LOVE I Want My Hat Back!!! <3 Can't imagine it any different!

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  10. Thanks, Marcie, for the fantastic interview. Jodi, your book has been in HEAVY naptime/bedtime rotation for the last three weeks. My three and five-year-old boys adore it! And the illustrations always prompt discussions about why the family can't "see" the dragon. We've concluded the boy's the only one who can because you have to have a fantastic imagination to see dragons.

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    1. Thanks so much Kirsten! I love to hear about the passionate discussions revolving around whether the Dragon is real or not. I always ask during school visits and it's often split 50/50!

      Hoping your boys grow up armed with fantastic imaginations! <3

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  11. Thanks Marcie and Jodi. Haven't seen it yet but the book sounds great (have it on library hold!) and I appreciate anything that will make even the adult reader wonder!

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    1. Aww, thanks, Julie! That makes me so happy that you have it on hold...for two reasons: 1) you want to read it and 2) someone else already is! ;-)

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  12. Jodi, thanks for sharing your experience. I love your perspective that illustrator's expand beyond the limits of the author's text. As I am learning the craft I am trying to leave more and more room for the illustrator.
    I am anxious to read your book, I hope my library has it. :-)

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    1. Thanks, Darshana. I hope your library has it too! ;-)

      I wish you much success - and joy! - as you embark upon this wonderful adventure. Hugs, Jodi :)

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  13. Marci thank you for having Jodi on here. It was a great and informative post. Jodi, congratulations on such a successful book and happy birthday to Dragon! I want to share this book with the early learners in my literacy program. I can just imagine all of the conversation and questions during the session. Jodi, with a book like this where the question is "Is he or isn't he?" How can you trust that you'll get an illustrator that gets it, if you don't leave some type of context clues? How does the illustrator "get it?"

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    1. Pam, I think it helped that my editor "got it" first. As you can see, there were several editors who didn't. I feel so blessed to have worked with Shari!

      It took an entire year of back and forth research and discussion to see if it was a possibility...how do you draw something that may or may not be there? I was very lucky that Shari included me here...many times, the author is left out completely. When she felt confident about our "vision", she moved forward, securing Howard and his brilliance. He took it to the next level.

      I could not be more blessed!!! *happy sigh* :)

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  14. Marci and Jodi...thanks. I thoroughly enjoyed this post. I haven't read your book yet, Jodi, but am really looking forward to it. It sounds delightful!

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    1. Aww, thanks, Penny! I hope you enjoy it! :)

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  15. This is a super amazing post...I absolutely loved reliving this journey with you and I agree...your illustrator is the bee's knees!!!

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  16. Kim, tons of thanks to you and TEAM DRAGON for your constant love, encouragement and support ALWAYS! <3!!!

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